Hey! It's finally on-line - my first theatre review. I think it's my first theatre review, anyway. I don't remember ever reviewing theatre before. So way-hey! Do read it, and then weigh in and tell me what you think. And yes, I did use the word "eschewed". Don't judge me.
They've moved some of the sentences around, so it doesn't flow quite the same way that I wrote it, but I don't think anything's been taken away altogether. I'd check with the copy I submitted, but I don't really care enough. I'm not sure I'm cut out for this, but then again, it's not ballet. The ballet reviews aren't on-line yet. I might let you know when they are.
They've moved some of the sentences around, so it doesn't flow quite the same way that I wrote it, but I don't think anything's been taken away altogether. I'd check with the copy I submitted, but I don't really care enough. I'm not sure I'm cut out for this, but then again, it's not ballet. The ballet reviews aren't on-line yet. I might let you know when they are.